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这里有一把写作的屠鸭刀,请拿好!(下期)

作者:发布时间:19-03-14浏览次数:

 大家好!

 

上篇晶晶老师给大家讲了新调配方一(上期:这里有一把屠鸭刀,请拿好!

 

上期留下的首段写作任务,同学们有去练习吗?觉得方法好用吗?

 

今天就来给大家讲解其余两种配方啦!

 

 

 

 

在进入正题之前呢,我们先来看看下面这两位同学有没有觉得很眼熟呢?

 

同学一

句子好难背哟,根本记不住。

 

老师答:

记都不记,记不住吗。感觉记不住,就不记了吗。

 

同学二

就是把模版句套进去改写嘛,我会呀。

 

老师答:

说是会写,下笔就会写了吗。Talk the talk but never walk the walk ?

 

OK!按你们的胃

 

继续我们的新调配方吧!不用背句子的那种!

 

新调配方二:论据提前法

 

1、选择提纲中的一条论据,简单引入写在开头段

 

2、正文不再就这条论据展开论述,或继续深入展开

 

前文题目回忆一下先?

 

立场选择 ——飞机使用应该减少

 

造成问题

 

1. air pollution

 

2. noise pollution

 

3. fuel consumption

 

不方便的点

 

4. expensive

 

5. trip to and from the airport

 

6. Inconvenient/annoying due to delay

 

看好,要变身啦…

 

 

1、 空气污染

 

Global warming is one of the most serious environmental problems that the whole world is facing today. The use of transportation tools, such as airplanes, is definitely responsible for it. Therefore, some people raise the point that the use of planes should be reduced, not only because of the pollution, but also because of the impractical aspects related. In my opinion, it is necessary to do so.

 

2、 噪音污染

 

We can often hear people living in the neighborhood of airports complain that they could not fall asleep at night because of the noise produced by the airplanes. Besides, the use of planes also causes some environmental problems. Therefore, some people raise the point that the use of planes should be reduced. In my opinion, …

 

接下来

 

就请大家可以DIY上篇看完后自己所写的version3—能源危机啦!

 

当然也可以依葫芦画瓢进行尝试version4-5-6喔~

 

新调配方三:场景描述法 

 

根据话题内容描述1-2个具体场景引出主题

 

请看例题

 

1. Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. What might have been the causes and suggest some measures that could be taken.

 

2. New parents should attend a parenting course to learn how to bring up their children well, do you agree or disagree?

 

 

来一波景风暴:

 

1. Have you ever been late for the date with friends because of the poor traffic? Have you ever felt irritable on the way to work during the rush hour on Monday morning? Actually these situations are happening everyday, driving every city dweller crazy.

 

2. Many new parents will feel strained when their baby suddenly cries. Many of them find it the greatest challenge in life to change a diaper. And these are just the beginning of a long way ahead. In my opinion, every new parent should go to a parenting school to get trained to be an experienced father or mother.

 

 

 

看到这里,同学们理解了吗?

 

Now,来盘题目自己练手咯:

 

题目:

 

3. In many countries women are able to join the armed forces now on the equal basis of men. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy and air forces. Do you agree or disagree?

 

4. Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

 

 

同学们可以根据本期所提到的方法来尝试练习上面的3、4题喔~

 

关于如何写好写作开头的内容就到这里啦,大家有好好吸收吗?

 

最后,欢迎大家在评论区进行切磋和分享哦~

 

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